T's Preliminary Check of Bambi by M.Obradovic

Marija, your article is too long – it has 518 words instead of 180-250. After you make it shorter, I will check it in more detail.

1st T's Check of Fresh and Co. article by M.Selakovic

Marija, your article is too short – it should have 180-250 words. Also, you should invent a catchy title.
You will notice that I have put some parts of your text in bold. Think about improving those sections – they might have article or vocabulary mistakes.

FRESH&CO
Fresh & Co was founded in Subotica in 1996. According to the market demands first product was non-alcoholic fruit-natural juice. This is a private company with very good organization:
-sales control
-centralized sales administration
-planning of deliveries
-stock control
Efficient distribution means that the productions are available to customers in all parts of country. Main products are natural fruit juices: next Premium-100% fruit and next Classic- 40% fruit. Business according to the customers demands is leading business politics. Company future is bigger market and satisfied customers.

ASSIGNMENT 1: TOP COMPANIES IN SERBIA

Your first assignment in this course will be to make some research about famous Serbian companies/organisations. You will choose the most interesting one and write an article (180-250 words). Your article should have a catchy title and be paragraphed according to the following guidelines:

- Company/organisation history
- Company/organisation structure
- Main products
- What makes it successful
- Company’s/organisation's future

You will use the same material to prepare a PP presentation.

The following links might be useful for your research:

Search engines

Krstarica
Business in Serbia
Yu Yellow Pages
Hemija

Links to texts about some successful companies/organisations in Serbia

Anlave
Dr Ristic Polyclinic
Hemofarm
Galenika
Metalac
Tigar
Simpo
Boreli
Fresh&Co.
Knjaz Miloš
Bambi
Štark
Dijamant
Maxi

Greetings

Hello,

I have opened this blog for you to use in our classroom or remote practice of writing. I hope the topics and proposed internet links will be relevant to your interests and that you will respond to other people's writing with encouraging comments.

Mira