1st T's Check of Fresh and Co. article by M.Selakovic
Marija, your article is too short – it should have 180-250 words. Also, you should invent a catchy title.
You will notice that I have put some parts of your text in bold. Think about improving those sections – they might have article or vocabulary mistakes.
FRESH&CO
Fresh & Co was founded in Subotica in 1996. According to the market demands first product was non-alcoholic fruit-natural juice. This is a private company with very good organization:
-sales control
-centralized sales administration
-planning of deliveries
-stock control
Efficient distribution means that the productions are available to customers in all parts of country. Main products are natural fruit juices: next Premium-100% fruit and next Classic- 40% fruit. Business according to the customers demands is leading business politics. Company future is bigger market and satisfied customers.
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